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Where did the story take place? The chocolate factory
Describe the most prominent setting.
The chocolate factory is a big building that’s owned by Mr. Willy Wonka. There are thousands of rooms with the names like, The nut room,The television-chocolate room, Exploding sweets for your enemies, Stick jaw for talkative parents, Fizzy lemonade swimming pool and Invisible chocolate bars for eating in class, there are a lot more rooms then you could possibly count. When you enter the factory there is a long hallway that leads to a very small door. Behind that door is the room where the chocolate is mixed by a waterfall, everything in that room is edible including the grass.
I like how you have listed some of the rooms in the factory, and how you have said 'there are a lot more rooms than you can possibly count. Next time you could change then to than in your story. It also sounds like it isn't finished so maybe you could add something to finish it.
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